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The Old Frontier

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Pack your bags, get your toothbrush
Find a car, find a silver cross
Throw a tarp over the windshield and we're covered
Get a road, lay it down flat
And behind us, we'll trail angel floss
So we stay over the sky and not under

It's a long, long way to whatever we want
It's an old frontier that we've never come across
And the last thing we need is to be cute and sad and lost
'Cause someone will pick us up and take us home
It's a long, long drive and we've got horses and tires
In case one breaks down and we're left on our own

Drive a MACK, drive a cloud,
Long as it gets you where you need
There's a sweet patch of road that must have once been dirt
There's a sweet patch of road
With a black-and-white candy stripe
A lovely accent to the Christmas trees and AstroTurf

It's a dark, dark tunnel, half collapsed and rolling under
And the crash of God's new thunder
Gave us heart attacks from wonder
So we've come to get away
Here in the old frontier, we'll hit the coast and build across it
We'll know what's on the other side someday

It's a long, long way to whatever it is we want
It's an old frontier that we've never come across
And the last thing we need is to be cute and sad and lost
'Cause someone will pick us up and take us home
It's a long, long drive and we can go on through the night
And when the sun comes up, we're left on our own
The product of combining Adventure Time with The Mountain Goats, apparently!

The idea behind this is that two people are fed up with the direction the world has gone and decide to travel until they find somewhere unspoiled. They're determined to start over completely, but it's been a while since anyone had an honest-to-God road trip, and they don't really know how it works. It's kind of like when a little kid decides to run away to Australia.

This one sounds good when I sing it, but I'm not sure how it translates on paper. Tell me what you think :)

But first, GO LOOK UP THE MOTHER FRACKING MOUNTAIN GOATS. There is no better lyricist I know of.
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RogueOfHeart's avatar
:33 < i want to start off by saying that i know nothing whatsoefur about adventure time, so purrlease k33p that in mind xDD
:33 < anyway, i like the images in this poem, like trailing angel floss and the black and white striped road. also, it actually sounds like its supposed to be a song, yay :DD
:33 < something you might want to consider fur this poem is that, since its written in the modern style (fr33-verse) the beginnings of the lines are not usually capitalized unless they are 'I' or other nouns or the furst word of a sentence.
:33 < also, since you put commas at the end of some of the lines, i would make the end punctuation a little more consistent.