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Gone again!

More or less same reason!

Will be back!

THANK YOU!
UPDATE: It didn't get into the lit magazine, apparently. So I get to post it here again!! Eh, not the first time I've been let down by a school publication :roll: Or, indeed, the fifth.

The first fairy tale!!!

I recommend clicking the little button at the top of the page that turns the background black. Adds to the mood. :XD:

I never did believe monsters lived under my bed. I did, however, have an overactive imagination, a shadowy room and a ton of imaginary friends, including one who helped me fall asleep when I was worried. TRUE STORY.

This is also the companion story to this image from a week or two ago: [link]
Someday I want to illustrate this. The end goal is to NOT look like a total Bill Watterson fangirl. You can guess how that's going to go.

Thoughts?
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RogueOfHeart Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012   Writer
:33 < oh, i like this a lot!!
:33 < i thought the little girl was going to die at the end, and im really glad she didnt xDD
:33 < its actually good that i thought that, though, beclaws a surpurrise ending is always a good thing!
:33 < i like how you managed to condense the entire story into this length without sacrificing the details that make it realistic. also, the tone is consistent, and even though its not really in anyones purrsona it still creates a f33ling of suspense as you get down to the end. good job :DD
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LizzywithaWhy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay can I just say I LOVE your thoughtful comments? They are such a help. <3
And thanks! The condensed/detailed story is what I was going for. And I'm glad the ending was a surprise :D
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RogueOfHeart Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   Writer
:33 < h33 h33, thank you!! youre welcome, and its nice to hear theyre apurreciated ;))
:33 < i think it would be really cool to s33 a picture of the man with metal hands :33
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LizzywithaWhy Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You very well may one day :D
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